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Tuesday, 26 April 2011

Critical Evaluation

1: In what ways does the media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?


Continuity is a majorly important convention to uphold, maintaining a solid concept of plot and character continuity is considered vital in modern day film. Whilst filming our production, we took careful observations to try and maintain a strong consistent level of continuity and avoid possible suspension of disbelief. Even with careful planning our continuity was not perfect, but any errors made were indistinguishable unless you were looking specifically for continuity errors, for instance a continuity error is the colour of Ruby’s bag which changes, as the original brown bag broke during filming, and we could only replace it with a black one on the day of filming.


Based on research into the generic conventions of a thriller film, our film’s main genre would be classified as a thriller due to our utilizing of generic conventions. A thriller films aim is to get the audience’s attention and keep them wanting more, we used a convention called a plot twist in our film to try and create this desired effect. A second generic convention of a thriller film we used was minor key music, which is often used in order to add to the suspense, mystery and overall atmosphere of the film. I believe our film fulfils the nature of the genre, we made no aim to deliberately subvert any expectations and we did not.


We did not deliberately use any elements of pastiche or parody in our production, our idea was completely original and drafted from a treatment made at the beginning of the term and our research into the thriller genre. Aspects of our film however could be seen to use elements of pastiche, for example our invisibility effect used could be considered pastiche of other thriller films using invisibility effects such as science fiction thriller Hollow Man.


The audience pleasure we were trying to achieve was based on Richard Dyers theory of entertainment, the aspect of intensity and the extremes of emotion’s invoked by the plight of Ruby Fox as she tries to regain her visibility and identity as well as coping with bullying. Our audience feedback showed we gained this aspect of intensity as a number of people spoke about how they related to the character through bullying after themselves being bullied in the past.



2: How effective is the combination of your main product and ancillary texts?


The main achievement we sought to obtain was to make our production a good short film, with a solid plot and storyline that would make people want to watch it and would invoke emotion into our audience using the bullying concept in our film. We wanted to broadcast a message through our production that said running away from a problem, or in Ruby Fox’s case turning invisible, isn’t a solution. We referred back to this in both our radio trailer and poster design. On the poster we utilized the tag line “All she ever wanted was to be invisible”, which refers to Ruby’s plight. In our radio trailer we also used this tagline to dramatic effect, using the voice of Ruby’s actor to whisper it in a chilling fashion. A second tagline we used in the radio trailer is “Sometimes your biggest wish could become your worst nightmare”, another referral to Ruby’s plight, and displaying her false judgment, that even though she in-avertedly ran away from her problems, it has only caused them to now worsen. The 2 taglines both help broadcast the message our production is trying to put across to our audience regarding bullying.





Radio Trailer Link


http://youtu.be/mFlHBuG5hos











3: What have you learned from your audience feedback?


Our initial step in gathering information for audience feedback was to create a questionnaire consisting of 9 questions, asking for answers rangin


g on subjects including the narrative of our film, the portrayal of bullying and improvements that could be made. We then let our prospective audience watch a rough edit of our production so they could answer the questionnaire; w


e filmed these answers using a Sony HDV 1000 camera and tripod. This helped us garner a concept of what our audience wanted to see, shows that we used genre conventions correctly and matched our set genre as well as how good they thought our film is overall.



After gathering feedback using this method, our group then separately conducted audience feedback sessions using social networking site http://www.facebook.com/. I constructed a template message which I sent to people asking them to kindly take the time to watch our rough edit which a link to was included and answer 6 questions on the film. This feedback gathered helped us to decide what the key things to strengthen were in the final cut of our production. With the assistance of audience feedback overall I think we made our film realistically believable and well adapted within the conventions of our chosen genre.



4: How did you use new me


dia technologies in the construction and research, planning and evaluation stages?


In the initial stages of starting blog work, one of the new technologies to adapt to using was the iMac interface and operating system, as primarily I have been a user of Windows and Linux operating systems and interfaces at home, school and college. Some of the new things I had to adapt to were new keyboard shortcuts, as I am quite adept using them on windows systems however they aren’t always strictly the same on iMac. Another feature to adapt to is the lack of a start bar, which is a pivotal feature of windo


ws systems and a very unusual change to a regular user, as apart from desktop shortcuts it is where you would access all of your programs, documents and other forms of files from.










For research, I usedvarious search engines such as http://www.google.com/, www.imdb.com and http://www.wikipedia.com/ to research films, film genres, generic conventions, distributors and various other things. I also made use of the site http://www.blogger.com/ to keep an online textual and multimedia log of our work. I felt using a blogging site helped improve my blogging skills immensely as I had no previous experience of blogging, giving me a skill that could be very useful for the future.


To create our film, we used a Sony HDV 1000 camera and tri-pod. Using the HDV was a massive change from using the smaller handheld cameras, it gives a massive improvement in terms of visual quality moving from what felt like an amateur quality to a more professional quality, however manoeuvrability is impaired due to the HDV being around 4 times the size of a handheld camera. The range of shots we could confidently use was improved using the HDV, as the lower quality of the handheld cameras previously used was an issue when it came to smaller more concise details we wanted noticing, or longer shots as again smaller details that are in the distance are harder to make out. Another strength of the HDV was the sound capturing quality it provided, which was a great deal clearer than the handheld cameras.


To edit our production we made use of exclusive apple iMac application software, a non linear video editing piece called Final Cut Express, which is designed for the purpose of advanced editing of digital and high definition video. It is used by amateurs and professional videographers and media personnel alike.


Using this software helped increase my creative skills and my understanding of editing film, including the different tools used in the software for instance transitional effects and the many methods of editing. The professional standard stood out compared to other video editing software I have used, for instance windows movie maker, offering more complexity and finer more detailed editing, further showing an increase in my skills.


For the final poster design, we used graphic image manipulation software package Adobe Photoshop, a very commonly used and high standard piece of software, well known for its user friendly tools. We used this program to insert text, images such as distributors and age certification logo, resize and cut our image, use tools to change the contrast and various other things.


For my own poster design however, I chose to use Adobe Fireworks, which I had previously used to create animated graphics for web design and other various tasks such as creating radio buttons and image optimization. I chose to use this programme as I had used it before to create simple images or animations, but I wanted to see how I could edit and manipulate images using the programme. Using Fireworks, I took a screenshot from our film and used various effects such as grey scaling the image to make the atmosphere more dark and moody to suit our genre. This further developed my skills using a piece of software I was already familiar with but using tools and features I had never been required to utilize before.


For the radio trailer, we used a piece of equipment I had never heard of before called a zoom recorder to record our scripted lines in a sound proofed room. We then imported the recording onto an iMac and used a piece of application software called Garageband to edit the required pieces of sound from the recording. I had no previous experience using this software however after doing some research using a search engine I discovered how to do so. This improved my skills using this particular piece of software, and my researching skills using the internet as I had to filter through a lot of websites containing non-essential search results.


Overall, I feel that new media technologies have helped improve my creativity as a whole, helping me develop new skills in sound recording and image manipulation, and further develop skills in filming, editing film, using unfamiliar operating system interfaces, conducting research using the internet and blogging skills. We have created various pieces of work to professional standards and an end product of undoubted quality using our developed skills and creativity.

Friday, 11 March 2011

Radio analysis

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FOZW2GzO98g

I will be analysing this radio trailer to look at aspects and and features that could be used in our own trailer. I will be analyzing a trailer from the popular psychological thriller film Shutter Island directed by Martin Scorsese and starred in by Leonardo Dicaprio The trailer contains a narrative voiceover, direct quotes from the film and information of the film's cinema release, starring actor and famous director.

The voiceover in this trailer is split between 3 characters, the first voice heard is that of a prison guard welcoming people to shutter island, after that the character Marshall is narrating discussing prisoners and theyre crimes, claiming they are 'all violent offenders, theyre hurt people, murdered them in some cases', also stating 'whatever the hells going on here, its bad'. This sets the mystery element into play using the serious worried tone of his voice. cutting to comments from one of the islands resident psychologist stating 'men of violence are my specialty. This line sparks connotations of the films violent background and also adds the proffesional and psychological element to it.

There is then a high pitched screaming/shrieking sound effect used to invoke fear and more mystery into the trailer, followed by the Leonardo Dicaprio character Marshalls narration 'let me see your face, let me see your damn face' followed by a shout of 'dont move!', also including another shriek at the end of it. As Marshall says each line he raises his voice and his tone gets more and more aggressive, suggesting a sense of urgency as things get more complicated.

The sound of a match being lit is the next sound, followed by a whisper of 'oh my god', suggesting horror and discreteness. Some information of the film is then stated 'Shutter island rated R in theatres febuary 19th', signifying the end of the trailer whilst informing the audience.

The music throughout the whole trailer is quite quiet, deep and dark, with sound effects adding to its effect, it steadily gathers pace getting faster and faster up to the line of 'oh my god' where it then cuts out with the sound of the match being lit. The music overall is minor key, and the music is non diagetic whereas the utterances by Marshall, the prison guard and the psychologist is diagetic as it is all taken directly from the film's audio.

The trailer overall uses its music to match the genre of the film, steadily gathering the musics pace to match the thriller genre, using the audio from the film to add elements of mystery and horror.





Tuesday, 8 March 2011

Audience Feedback

To carry out audience feedback, i sent a message on facebook containing a link to our film and the feedback questions, asking for responses that i could print screen onto our blog. This is the message i sent to people asking to help with the feedback process.














And here are the replys i recieved from willing recipents.













17 year old male.













36 year old female.














17 year old male.













19 year old male.












19 year old female















After analysing the results of my questions, I found a number of differing opinions and constrasting statements on certain aspects of our film. People repeatedly expressed empathy for the characters situation as they had been bullied in theyre own lifes, showing we represented the character ideally.

All recipents thought the music was ideal and suited our production fully, one even citing the differences between the minor and major key music we used. 4 correctly assumed that the one of the genre's was Drama, with 2 also thinking it was part fantasy. All recipents thought that the invisibility scene was very good and could not find a problem with it. Overall the comments were generally good and showed flaws and strong points in our production.

Poster Design


This is my own personal design for our production, 'Shadow'.

I have used macromedia fireworks to create this poster, using a screenshot from the uploaded rough version of our production on youtube for the base photo. I felt it would be best to use an already existing photo instead of creating a new one from scratch as scenes from our film already captured the features we would look for in a poster that we could extract and use, for example to match our genre the majority of colours in the image are darker.

In the central image, I also made use of an effect using macromedia fireworks to put a slight glowing outline around the person visible in shot so that they stood out a little bit more and represented theyre identity in the film as a antagonist to the main character, also singling out the character. I also greyscaled the background to give the shot a more dark, moody feel which fitted out genre and the situation in shot. Also in the central image clearly visible is the main prop, the necklace the character in shot leaves on the tree for the unsuspecting ruby fox. I decided to use this in the poster as being the main prop and playing a major part in the film i thought it would be a good idea to show our audience it and highlight it's importance.

I used a more old fashioned gothic style text for my title of Shadow to fit the darker moodier tone of the poster and our film, also making the text white so its stands out and contrasts against the darker colours used in the image. I chose to use no tagline in my poster as i thought with the character depicted having no dialogue, no clear motive or any characterization in our film overall anything i may use as it would relate to the character may be unreliable or incorrect.

Wednesday, 2 March 2011

Audience Feedback questions for rough edit

1) Do you think that the narrative of the film is believable?
2) Do you feel you can relate to the characters?
3) What genre do you think the film is?
4) Do you feel that the music was appropriate for the film?
5) Do you think that the invisibility effect looked realistic?
6) Do you feel that the issue of bullying is portrayed well?
7) Which particular scenes do you find most engaging?
8) Do you feel there are any scenes which could be improved?
9) Would you recommend this film to a friend?

Tuesday, 1 February 2011

Shadow - Rough Edit



Here is our first rough edit of our 5 minute short film, this is to be finalised, with excellent continuity.

Tuesday, 23 November 2010

Shadow - Re Plan

After starting our filming, we have decided to re-write our script and change how the storyline of our short film is shown. We have replaced a few weaker scenes in our film and decided to use a few more complicated and creative shots. We have decided to cut the following characters; - College Tutor - Ruby Fox's mother and father We found that the characters were not longer suitable for the narrative film, and therefore the costume design for the following characters are also no longer of importance.

Thursday, 21 October 2010

Unique Selling Points (USP)

A unique selling point is a marketing concept that makes unique appeals to to a viewer in order to attract theyre interest.

In this post i am going to identify the unique selling points in films that have got clear unique features in them e.g plotlines that there is nothing similar to, a score of music specially attributed to the film, possibly even a specific actor who makes the film what it is or if a film is derived from a book, as this means it may already have interest before it even begins production.

For example, a unique selling point of 1951 film 'A streetcar names desire' was the casting of famed actor Marlon Brando, who was unique at the time due to him being relatively unknown and under-rated before this film and his tight t-shirts which at the time were unheard of, it had to be specially made.

Another film with a usp is the Harry Potter saga. Being derived from an extremely popular series of books, having iconic actors in Daniel Radcliffe, Rupert Grint and Emma Watson cast as the three main charecters and of course the even more iconic plotline full of mystery and magic which the world had never experienced before Harry Potter came into fruition.

The unique selling point in our production is our plotline, the schoolgirl who finds a cursed necklace that makes her invisible, unbeknowing that it is slowly but surely wiping her existence from the universe. In our groups research we have found no similar plotline to our production, making this the unique selling point to our film.

Tuesday, 5 October 2010

Video Questionnaire

In order for our film to have a large audience, we must first interview a few members of our target audience, which will enable us as a production company to make our film successful.
After revealing the plot to the audience, we then asked them a series of questions in order to receive their opinions.

1. What is your opinion on the film's plot?

2. Do you believe the characters and storyline are realistic?


3. Could you relate to any of the characters?


4. What age range do you believe would be interested in watching this film?


5. Do you agree that this film should be a 12A?
(If not, please give your reason) ______________________


6. Do you feel that the film appropriately matches its genre?


7. Do you believe this film is aimed at a specific gender?


8. Where would you watch this film?
• The cinema
• At home
• Elsewhere
(please give details) _________________________


9. What other thriller films do you enjoy?


10. Which genre of thriller films do you enjoy the most?
• Fiction
• Mystery
• Crime
• Psychological
• Other
(If other please state) _________________________________


11. Which films do you believe are similar to ours?


12. Which type of music do you associate with thriller films?
Please give an example ___________________________



13. Do you believe the films narrative is appropriate for the certification?


14. Would you ever watch a short film?


15. Would you recommend this to a friend?

Friday, 17 September 2010

Short film concepts analysis

For our short film production we are researching key concepts in other films to give us inspiration for our own production. The first concept we researched is the twist in films that give audiences a thrill and entertain them, in some cases it can be the make or break part of the film that determines if it is generally praised or criticized.

The film we have researched is a short film called 'LOVEFIELD', a short film by Mathieu Ratthe which is described in the synopsis 'Lovefield combines elements of HORROR, SUSPENSE and DRAMA to create a story that takes the audience on a roller coaster ride of emotions'.

Initially the film starts with the title over a field of crops waving in a rasping wind and a chilling minor key piece which gives it a cold, morbid atmosphere. The camera then moves onto a creaking sign swaying in the wind with a crow perching menacingly on the top, cawing into the silence. The tension is almost unbearable at this point and the promise in the synopsis of a 'roller coaster ride of emotions' is looking like a certainty.

The camera now focuses on a small circular indentation in the crop, the camera crawling through the downtrodden crops showing various objects scattered across the floor, such as a dollar bill and a wallet. The camera then pans onto a foot trodden in dirt and blood. Then suddenly a small dagger type object is thrust into the ground next to the foot with tremendous force and the chilling sound of the blade slicing into the ground. This causes a shock and quite a jump-mongering effect, it adds a dangerous and violent element into the mix, adding to what seems like its going to be a gruesome ending so far.

The camera then pans up the body of a burly man wearing what appears to be denim overalls, with unkempt hair and a trucker hat, gazing at the cawing crow on the sign. The unknown male then surveys the area and starts to walk backwards away from the scene, eventually breaking into a sprint across the field, eventually reaching a car. With the door already ajar, he searches inside the passenger side seat, taking the car keys and opening the boot. The camera view switches to inside the boot and shows the man looking into the boot, searching through it as the crow continues its shrill crys.

He eventually pulls out a ragged blanket, before peering over the car boot to see the crow has landed on top of the car, unrelentingly raucously cawing at him. He continues undeterred by the crow and walks around the car, while the crow returns to the top of the sign. The camera moves into a high angled shot showing in the left hand bottom corner of the camera the bloodied foot of the apparent victim and the small dagger intimidatingly protruding out of the ground. The man walks down towards the body and stops in front of her. He kneels and appears to be putting the blanket down over the body as the crow's cawing becomes almost unbelievably consistent.

Then suddenly the crow stops cawing, appearing astounded by whatever it is seeing outside of shot, almost comically open mouthed. The shot then changes to what appears to be the man pulling the blanket back, he actually pulls the blanket back with a little baby wrapped up in it, and the women leaning into the shot handing it to him. The baby crys with apparent joy and certainly my heart has skipped a beat at a fantastic twist in the story, which i certainly did not expect.

The camera switches to a close up shot of the mother of the baby, the apparent victim says thank you to the would be murderer, grinning from ear to ear, laughing along with the man. The crow continues to caw with less urgency and alarm, and the camera switches to a craned - long shot surveying the whole scene, with the sun now shining in the sky like a beacon of hope, an apparent prayed answered as a police car drives by and the man flags it down. They stop and the police man rushes into the scene, as it dissolves into the ending credits, leaving you feeling quite happy for the women and feeling something emotionally for her.

The element we researched in this film was the twist, a pivotal moment as aforementioned in this review and this short production certainly shows a riveting twist which is scintillating and at the same time a fresh sigh of relief for the would-be victim, leaving the audience feeling something for the women, by luring the audience into a pseudo disequilibrium by manipulating sound, using some intelligent camera work and good editing when really its something as innocent and natural as giving birth.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4meeZifCVro

Thursday, 16 September 2010

Final Film Treatment - SHADOW

Film Title: Shadow
Duration: 5 minutes
Audience: 15 – 30+. This film is not targeted at a niche audience as it could be reviewed by all types of people. However it may be targeted more towards a female audience, as it portrays a dominant female character.
Certificate: 12A
Synopsis: The film opens with an unidentified female character running along a public footpath surrounded by trees; she is clutching something in her hand and appears to be fearful and nervous. Further down the path she stops and throws the object she is clutching into the trees. Two weeks later, a teenage girl is walking down the same path, on her way to college; she has an over shoulder school bag, is listening to her iPod, and texting. A glistening object which is caught in the trees catches her eye. Intrigued, she walks towards the object, which at this point can be identified as a necklace. Entranced by the necklace, she removes it from the tree and takes it with her. The girl arrives at college and it is easy to see that she is an outcast; she walks past a group of girls who snigger and begin to whisper. Sighing the girl heads to the toilet for privacy. Here she removes the necklace from her bag and inspects it. The girl admires the necklace and seems to be mesmerised by it. She goes into the toilets and tries the necklace on in front of the mirror. As she is looking at her reflection she remembers the time and rushes to her lesson.The girl is late to her lesson, but as she enters the classroom the tutor doesn’t seem to notice her, she walks to the desk and tries to explain but the tutor just ignores her, so the girl takes her seat. No-one even glances at her as she walks to the back of the classroom. Throughout the lesson the tutor continues to ignore the girl – when she raises to answer questions and when the worksheets are handed out. At this point in the lesson the tutor asks the class if they have seen the girl- frustrated by this, the girl waves her hand in front of the tutors face and realises that he can’t actually see her; thrilled the girl leaves the classroom unnoticed. As she wanders around the college she realises that no-one can see her- so she goes home.When she arrives home she can hear worried voices in the kitchen- as she enters she sees her parents frantic and contemplating calling the police as she seemingly has not arrived at college today. Panicked the girl tries to get her parents attention- but like the others they cannot see her either and leave to search for her.
Distraught she runs to her bedroom and collapses on her bed. Here she cries herself to sleep, as the audience watches the girl disappear from a photo next to her bed. Next morning the girl, rough from the previous night, realises that she is still invisible- her parents have not returned and the house is empty. Alarmed the girl notices the photo beside her bed- and her absence from it; she grabs the photo and runs to college.At college, she tries to catch people’s attention by frantically waving in their faces; once again this does not work so she rushes back to the toilets.Here she watches her reflection in the mirror disappear- with a sudden stab of realisation she touches the necklace around her neck- and as she removes it her reflection re-appears.The girl wipes the tears from her face and looks at the necklace with determination.Later that day we see the girl stood on a bridge, she is holding the necklace out above the water. Slowly she lets the necklace drop into the water and walks away. As she does she removes the photo from, her pocket and sees that she has returned to it.
Suggested Elements:
1. Mirror shot- a character’s reflection dissolves out, leaving the person looking into the mirror.
2. Photo Shot – a person dissolves out from a photograph.
3. Voice over – the audience is able to hear the characters thoughts.
4. Dramatic Music – this helps to set the scene and adds tension.
5. Glistening Effect – added to objects in the film to make them stand out.

Friday, 10 September 2010

Treatment for - Superzero

Film Title: Superzero

Duration: 5 minutes

Audience: 13-30, targeting new and existing superhero film fans.

Resume: A boy by the name of Blaine Connoly, your average everyday college student is the punching bag of his college, spoke to like he's dirt and bullied til the point of breaking. He decides he has had enough of his woefull life and identity, he contemplates in a narrative esque of making the world a better place, or at least his world. He creates an alter-ego superhero costume, which he fails to name. However during its first use someone infamously dubs him 'superzero', as he talks himself into a fight and fails to even land a blow. He attempts to 'induce' superpowers on himself by submitting himself to radiation e.g. trying to microwave himself, celotaping a mobile to his ear whilst he sleeps to soak up mobile radiation. He continues his tirade for good but gets himself into a complicated web of trouble he never expected . .


Budget Estimate: £300,000